1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. Research: 5 Music video/magazine concept: 5 Language terminology and theory: 4 Representation: 4 Audience and industry: 5 Delivery: 4 Total: 27/30 Volunteered to go first-brilliant Good juxtaposition of mainstream genre/artist Clear good research into artists, videos, colours Nice idea for music magazine too Delivery quite quick but this is due to having lots to say! Mise-en-scene addressed in detail across multiple slides Camerawork quite brief but editing a real strength Some great ideas in terms of representation and stereotyping- I like the point of gene Brilliant evidence of planning-e.g annotated lyrics Audience addressed across multiple slides-pleasures a particular strength Excellent industry research (record company, similar magazine, publisher etc.) and also you researched into similar artists as part of audience will help here Impressive, comprehensive presentation that is cle