Statement of Intent feedback and learner response
Mark: 6 Grade: C Comments for AQA: This is a clear statement of intent that comprehensively covers the key concepts of media and uses theory and terminology extensively although without quite the depth or insight for level 4 or 5 in the mark scheme. There is a good concept here that matches the music video / music magazine brief but without being entirely clear in terms of narrative or content. It does target the specified audience appropriately. Media language elements are discussed but without specific description or detail which holds this back from the top levels. It is not clear exactly what the three-minute video will include in terms of narrative. Performance element is mentioned but not explained or expanded on. Representation and stereotyping is mentioned in places with some interesting ideas but not quite the depth or discussion for top level. Further application of theory and discussion of the stereotypes mentioned could push this towards the...